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* I think the commas here are a bit off - gymnastics, basketball, and soccer coaches, basketball referees...  It should probably be ...gymnastics, basketball and soccer coaches, basketball referees, ... [[User:Alexayerdi|Alexayerdi]] ([[User talk:Alexayerdi|talk]]) 10:14, 4 June 2015 (CDT)
* I think the commas here are a bit off - gymnastics, basketball, and soccer coaches, basketball referees...  It should probably be ...gymnastics, basketball and soccer coaches, basketball referees, ... [[User:Alexayerdi|Alexayerdi]] ([[User talk:Alexayerdi|talk]]) 10:14, 4 June 2015 (CDT)
**I looked it up in the Purdue Online Writing lab and I think that grammatically it should be ...basketball, and soccer coaches, basketball referees...[[User:Trst|Trst]] ([[User talk:Trst|talk]]) 12:43, 4 June 2015 (CDT)

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  • I think the commas here are a bit off - gymnastics, basketball, and soccer coaches, basketball referees... It should probably be ...gymnastics, basketball and soccer coaches, basketball referees, ... Alexayerdi (talk) 10:14, 4 June 2015 (CDT)
    • I looked it up in the Purdue Online Writing lab and I think that grammatically it should be ...basketball, and soccer coaches, basketball referees...Trst (talk) 12:43, 4 June 2015 (CDT)