Talk:Dindabases
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- As a note on bias, your description is leaning towards being negatively biased. Is this term only associated with the infamous and hard nature of the class, or are there other positive/neutral connotations?Trst (talk) 13:11, 4 June 2015 (CDT)
- You do have a sentence that starts out on the more positive side, but gains a negative connotation by the phrase "perhaps more than you'll ever need to know in the real world". If you remove that, you may have a good balance of negative and positive in the entire description.Trst (talk) 13:11, 4 June 2015 (CDT)
- Completed Alexayerdi (talk) 14:40, 4 June 2015 (CDT)
- You do have a sentence that starts out on the more positive side, but gains a negative connotation by the phrase "perhaps more than you'll ever need to know in the real world". If you remove that, you may have a good balance of negative and positive in the entire description.Trst (talk) 13:11, 4 June 2015 (CDT)
